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Fighting to the Bitter end...


I'm no coward,
I will not fall nor will I fail.
I will stand tall and proud
No matter how tired I am or I get.

I will never fail my mission,
No sir!
I will remain tall and proud as
The soldier I am.I will never give up,
I will stand and fight till the bitter end,
Yes sir!

No sir I will not fall down and loose
This bitter fight,
I will always remain
Standing tall and proud,
Fighting till the bitter end...



(AN: Oi I know sucks hence why I don't write poems.. I like reading them just not writing them xD)
:iconhikyuutera:
rofl!!! I'm new at this submitting poems... xD Any ways I know it sucks.. but oh well. This is what I get when I fight the ongoing battle of sleep. It's amazing what you get when you're really sleepy.. This was meant to be humor. I wrote this cause well I was fighting the battle of sleep....
Anyhow I may scrap it or remove it. This might be a one time deal never know what my mind will come up with next. xD

The picture is not mine! The original can be found here:
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:iconhikyuutera:
lol!! thanks. :hug: :hug: =D
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:iconwhiterasengan:
!WhiteRasengan Jul 2, 2006   Interface Designer
0_0...right, america...wonderful
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:iconhikyuutera:
what?? what's wrong with America?... oh wait never mind don't answer that. >.>x
xD
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:iconwhiterasengan:
!WhiteRasengan Jul 2, 2006   Interface Designer
what isn't wrong with america is a better question to ask.
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:iconthesoulwithin:
I like reading them too, but I'm not too good at writing them as well ^^;
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:iconhikyuutera:
I find poetry to be just hard to think of... In school when we were assigned to write poems I never made a good one. lol
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:iconparanoid-duckkie:
Did you write this because of the fourth of july comming up or did you just put the Eagle there cause it kinda fit and it was cool looking?
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:iconhikyuutera:
lol no. It was more of a spur of the moment thing. It just popped into my head when I wrote.I don't usually write poetry. I originally had a Kenshin picture for a preview piccy but people kept making me change it so I did. To be truthful when I had wrote it I was thinking of Kenshin xD
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