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In a world so cruel
People so cruel
A child is tainted
Because of selfish
Reasons,
~
Reasons that cannot
Be amended for,
For the pain and
Anguish sorrow,
Sorrow this child goes
Through.
~
A pain that cannot be
Undone,
Undone is his life at an
Age he has yet to live,
Live for nothing yet
For something.
~
However this child
Smiles,
Smiling because he
Has a dream,
A dream of being
Noticed,
~
Noticed into society,
A society that thinks
He's a monster,
A monster that
Destroyed dreams
And lives,
~
Live, he does
In order to gain that
Dream,
A dream of finally being
Acknowledged,
Acknowledged in this
~
Cruel world he is born into.
Still he won't give up,
Up the chance and life
He's been given,
Given this strength of a
Demon,
~
Demon so cruel in it's
Wake. People think of
This child as a menace
And a threat.
Yet he still won't give up,
Give up the chance to live.
~
People redicule this child for
The demon in him.
And yet he shrugs it off.
This demon in him grows
Ever so strong,
Stronger enough to break
~
It's seal.
Yet he will not give up,
No he will not give up
Without a fight,
A fight he will struggle against,
Against the bitterness of this world.
~
He will not stop this bitter fight,
Not even if he was tired,
Tired of the painful comment
People say to him and behind his
Back,
He will always be back if he leaves.
~
He will never fail those he considers
Comrades.
No never will he give up,
Give up without a fight,
A fight he will fight till his last breath.
This child who appears niave
~
And stupid,
Stupid they call him for what
He does,
This he does to cover the
Bitterness that flows through
His body,
~
Everytime he is called names,
Names of hatred,
Hatred for what he can not help.
Yet he will always try to help.
For this he is still blamed and
Rediculed.
~
Rediculed thanks to the demon
That lives in him.
The demon that gives strength,
Strength towards his dreams.
Dreams he will make everyone,
Everyone believe will come true.
~
This is why he will not give up,
He will never fail nor will he stop
Fighting.
A fight that will help achieve his goal.
He used to listen to these cruel names.
Now he shrugs them off.
~
He fights still to become stong,
The strongest that ever was.
A leader he is yet, he doesn't know.
Oblivious he seems to everything,
Yet he isn't,
He is smarter than people take him
~
For.
He hides his true self from everyone,
Because he thinks he doesn't need anyone.
Yet to this is why he will never give up his
Fight,
A fight that will always burden him.
~
(An: Why do I write these things.. >.<x)
I thought it was a great piece. Keep up the amazing writing hun, seriously. This one hit close to home....
I want to take it and manip it into something like a backround or something.... Remind me in the future I want to do that.
Since I'm in Mississippi, I wont be able to do that. I don't even have my laptop here (left it back home @ my madre's house). SO.... in case I forget, if and WHEN I go back home. Remind me about this. I lurve it. ^_^
Thanks for sharing this with everyone.
Bye!
~Nesshy
I don't know about my writing.. *has no idea what she is really doing when writing poetry except writing what comes from her own* I don't really rely on the whole different names of the types of poems or well structures.. *just makes up her own*
It did? O.Ox
Nah you don't have. ^_<x
Dun worry you'll get to come home sooner or later. It's just a matter of time and patience. And really you don't have to ^_<x unless you really want to.
You're welcome ^_^x
lol Nesshy? j/k
Nesshin-sama
sad
- the child seems to never get recognized for what the child is (u kno the being urself part)
- the child tries to be noticed but isn't.
- reminds me of someone from school.
- "He will never fail those he considers" not even friends (comrades) give the child the attention he/she deserves.
creepy
- the demon idea (symbolism i'm pretty sure. but still
i hope this made better sense xD
xD
it is
Thank yous!
*is lame that she knows who Hamtaro is...*
Naruto is a shinobie(ninja) Naruto is the title of the show to.. ask AmiFire.. or Nyiana-Sama they're huge fans of it...
*feels stupid at the fact that he thought it was a hamster show*
i nvr watch the hamster show
and ok lol
btw u mad at me?? u didn't reply to me note. so idk >_>
plz say sumthin here lol
btw. i think the hamataro hamster's coolness
xD a hamtaro ham ham emote.. >.>x *could see that*